IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.


Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Write at least 150 words.


Model Answer:

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about some important documents that I might have misplaced while attending a conference at your hotel ‘Le Meridian’ on 26th of April. The conference was held at the ‘Imperial’ banquet hall.  I am quite sure that I have left those documents unattended in the above mentioned banquet hall. All of those documents should be in a black folder with my name ‘Ralph’ written on top of it.

In particular, the documents are of extreme importance to me. They contain all the valuable notes that I took in the course of the meeting that day along with some confidential financial information about my company. Without those documents I would not be able to submit my upcoming business plan for review.



I would humbly request if you could please ask your staff to conduct a thorough search at the banquet hall.If you find those papers please give me a call on my cell phone at 96666666. I will be more than happy to collect them at the earliest possible time.

I  look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ralph

 

Total Words: 188

Task Achievement: 9

Coherence & Cohesion: 9

Lexical resources: 8

Grammar: 8

Overall Score: Band 8.5

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1 Comment
  1. MohammadReza 3 years ago

    Thank you for the post

    Would you specify the grammatical and lexical errors as well?

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