Alright ... Now that you have generated a lot of ideas for your task and have fully explained and supported them its time to start planning the structure of your essay and start writing. Your essay should have the following structure:


Over the last decade there has been a steady rise in ....

It is important to establish why this has happened and to look at ways to solve the problem....

Paragraph 1

One reason is the increase in single parent families... supporting reasons

Another factor is that video games and television have replaced outdoor activities ... examples and supporting reasons

Paragraph 2

There are however ways to tackle these problems..

Firstly parents should ....

Secondly teenagers themselves should ...

Paragraph 3

Governments can also play a role by ...

Additionally local communities should ...


Thus, it is clear that there are various reasons for the increase in obesity .... but solutions are available.. If teenagers, families, communities and government all work hand in hand we may be able to prevent the situation from declining further.

Note: It is not necessary to write a title for your essay.

Finally check your work for mistakes

Once you have finished writing your essay, make sure you  go over your work to check for any grammar and spelling mistakes.

1 Comment
  1. Komal Kaur 5 years ago

    Some websites suggest writing four paragraphs, is it so?

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