IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 with model answer

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Write at least 150 Words.

Model Answer:

The line graph depicts the trend in the sale of Harry's Hamburgers over a period of one year from January 2007 to December 2007.

Overall, the maximum sale of hamburgers was reported in August 2007 when it reached the 3,000 mark. Thereafter, the sale of the hamburgers decreased and finally reached the lowest value of 1,250 in October of 2007. 

In the year 2007, the number of hamburgers sold in January a little less than 2,000. Till March the sale figures were varying between 1,750 and 2,000. From May, the sale figures continued to rise and finally, it reached 3,000 in August. It then decreased gradually to 2,500 in September, after which, there was a steep fall in the sales till it reached its nadir at 1,250 in October. After October, there was a rise in the sale again and the sale figures reached 1,750 in December. 

 

Total Words: 15o

Task Achievement: 8

Coherence & Cohesion: 8

Lexical resources: 8

Grammar: 8

Overall Score: Band 8

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