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Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Model Answer – Diagram – Procedure for university entry for high school 4 months, 3 weeks ago
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.
Summarise the information by
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Will Getting a Degree Guarantee a Good Job? 4 months, 3 weeks ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicSome people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Big cities have become overcrowded 4 months, 3 weeks ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicNowadays many big cities have become overcrowded. Why is it happening, in your
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Plant and Animal Species Declining – Causes and Solutions. 5 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicTopic: Plant and Animal Species Declining – Causes and Solutions.
In many
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Role of women in police or military forces 5 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicTopic: Role of Women
Some people are of the opinion that women should play an
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Money is the most important factor for achieving happiness 5 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicSome people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness.
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Parents should give their children complete freedom 5 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicTopic: Parent Child Freedom
Some people think that parents should give their
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Destruction of World’s Forests Amounts to Death of The World 1 year, 7 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicForests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Model Answer – Table – Household Income of Five European Countries 1 year, 7 months ago
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and dr
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: International Tourism Advantages Disadvantages 1 year, 7 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicInternational tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same t
are there any templates for complete agreement or complete disagreement, for body 1 and body 2?
it is always about a partial agreement.
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Change – Good or Bad? 1 year, 7 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicSome people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change.
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: Unable to continue voluntary work 1 year, 7 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicYou have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Students should study whatever they like. 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicSome people think that all university students should study whatever they like.
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: Letter to neighbour about new fence. 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicYou are having problems with a neighbours animals because the fence between
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: Letter about important papers left at the hotel 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicYou recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: Letter from a friend asking for advice 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicYou recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go
Hi,
Thanks for pointing that out. You are absolutely right.
The sentence has been fixed.
Dear Irene,
A few formal words do not change the overall tone of the letter. There are still many informal elements in the letter such as use of informal phrases like “in the pink of health”, contractions such as “won’t”, and using “Best” as sign off.
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
Atul.
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS General Writing Task 1 Model Answer: Letter to Neighbour 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 1 with model answer
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicYou are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between y
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Effect of Internet Usage on Social Interaction 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicAccording to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they s
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Air Traffic 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS Writing Task 2 with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topicAir traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. O
Peter Raymund wrote a new post, IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer: Telecommuting 1 year, 8 months ago
IELTS General Writing Task 2 with model answer
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic‘Telecommuting’ refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each w
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Hi Jay,
Yes, it does look like the writer was trying a bit too hard to impress the examiner :) The language could’ve been simpler to improve readability of the essay.
However, the arguments were well thought out and extended with supporting arguments. The writer also has a good range of vocabulary and grammar.